Subnormality
She had big dreams,
She hoped they would come
true,
She was like a wishing well,
Full of quarters, and
pennies,
But none of her dreams ever
came true,
So, one day she just, gave
up,
She was sad, and alone,
Hopeless, and empty,
Her well had dried up,
She still had dreams,
But only in her sleep,
It was magical, and amazing,
Colorful, like looking
through a kaleidoscope,
So, every night, she ran
away in her sleep,
To this marvelous paradise,
It was subnormal, some might
say weird,
But one day, she decided to
never leave,
She stayed in her dreams,
Asleep,
She never awoke, and when
they found her,
She had a clever smile, upon her face.
I wanna be able to write like you. :P What can I say? It works really well. Once again, maybe fix up the punctuation if you feel it works. I'm just a little picky with that. :P Otherwise, I like the message it sends me. Being in that place once where all I wanted to do was sleep and felt like all my dreams were out of reach, it really speaks to me. Also the last line is grusomely brilliant. :)
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