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I don’t want to see you go,
I want somebody to love me,
Dear Mr. lonely how much could you know me?
Love me like you use to,
Love me like there’s no one else in the world,
But you, and I.
Everything’s so fragile,
And we can’t put back the pieces,
I feel so broken up, and I give up.
And god knows, that it’s a common miss conception,
That I’m the only one for you.
We found love, in a coffee shop,
But now I feel, my coffee has gone black,
Tasteless and bitter,
Not even a hint of cream, or sugar.
I can’t steal you, like you stole me.
But I want you in my life.
And I need you in my arms.
Love it again! :) I especially love the lines: And God knows, that it's a common miss conception, that I'm the only one for you. / But now I feel, my coffee has gone black, tasteless and bitter, and not even a hint of cream, or sugar. I pacing is perfect and when read out loud really adds a feel to the poem that flows.
ReplyDeleteAlso the sense of desperation is really deep.
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